The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea.
The given diagram highlights the process by which black tea is manufactured. There are two diverse methods for doing it; the traditional one and
also
the modern style.
The first
step
is that Fresh tea leaves are picked by a Worker who knows that she should pick two types only and then
second Correct your spelling
the
step
is started in the name of withering at which point a fan is involved to dry leaves and also
a rack; a stage helps that around 60% moisture are cut.
At this
point, two
traditional and modern stages become separated. Correct article usage
the two
In other words
, Cutting
method is utilized in modern one by way of Cutting, Add an article
the Cutting
a Cutting
torning
and curling leaves; a way to create smaller pieces quickly Correct your spelling
turning
while
in the other style, Rolling is used which makes leaves be rolled flat and broked with the aim of releasing enzymes from them.
Followingly, Oxidation
or Fermentation Correct article usage
the Oxidation
step
is involved which is samed
in both methods to Correct your spelling
same
speard
them either tiles or cement which gives a helping hand to combine air and enzymes to alter their Correct your spelling
spread
colors
to copper. The Change the spelling
colours
last
step
is Firing
/Drying process in Correct article usage
the Firing
oven
owing to Correct article usage
the oven
releasing
flavour and aroma Wrong verb form
release
along with
outing 97% moisture totally
.Change the word
total
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