The pie charts below show the selected causes of death as a percentage of all deaths of registered Indians and the total population in 1992.

The pie charts below show the selected causes of death as a percentage of all deaths of registered Indians and the total population in 1992.
The provided pie charts illustrate statistical information concerning the chosen
death
causes of registered
Indians
and the total
population
in 1992. As can be seen from the four graphs, there have some differences in
death
causes between registered
Indians
and the total
population
.
Furthermore
, men's causes of
death
are compared to women's. In registered
Indians
, both male and female, the proportion of circulatory is over twenty per cent.
Besides
, a third of male and 18% of female
Indians
died of injuries.
Death
of respiratory is only under ten per cent in all registered
Indians
.
In addition
, the percentage of infectious is only two per cent.
On the other hand
, in the total
population
, the majority of
death
is by circulatory. And
then
, the neoplasms
death
rate of the total
population
is double against the registered
Indians
.
Whereas
the figures for injuries are under half of
Indians
.
However
, the respiratory and infectious rates are similar for
Indians
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • mortality rates
  • cardiovascular diseases
  • neoplasms (cancers)
  • chronic diseases
  • infectious diseases
  • statistical significance
  • preventable causes
  • health disparities
  • lifestyle factors
  • epidemiological data
  • public health
  • socioeconomic factors
  • medical conditions
  • healthcare access
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