In order to take up a new sport, some people think that it is better to have access to the latest technology and the most up-to-date equipment. Other people believe that these things are not necessary for starting a new sport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

For decades, the importance of

doing

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exercise is being enhanced among citizens. Some say that using cutting-edge technology is essential to learn a new

sport

while

others consider it

as

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an unnecessary item to be accustomed

with

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to

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novel

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sport

. In

this

essay, I will look at both sides and try to draw some conclusions. On the one hand, the majority of people ponder that utilizing the latest modern

equipment

contributes to

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the possibility of being injured

whereas

these types of facilities are produced to help sporters , especially

who

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those who

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are not

adepting

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adapting

adopting

;

moreover

,The result of a survey in Canada explored that over 30 per cent of people who commenced new types of

sport

in 2019, could escape from severe injuries by way of using up-to-date

equipment

rather than old ones.

As a consequence

, modern

equipment

is produced

due to

hinder negative previous shortcomings related to old

equipment

and

hence

, gives a helping hand to learn the ropes of Fresh

sport

.

On the other hand

, a growing number of folks comprehend that perseverance is the only needed trait to start since most Sports do not need a lot of supplies or at least optional items can be replaced

instead

of using cutting-edge tools.

For example

, two out of every five well-known sportsmen and actors commenced doing their hobby with their bare hands like Jackie Chan.

In other words

, if you are eager to become a Professional, the only

equipment

you need is practice without any special supplies.

As a result

, you have to embark on decisions first on your minds and

thus

,the accomplishment embraces you after some years. In conclusion, there is no doubt communities are now aware of the valuable benefits of doing exercise at any cost ;

however

, some think that it is possible by way of special tools. Personally, in my opinion, both views are correct to some extent.