some people belive that conservation methods are onlyy good for wild animals and enviroment. others think it is the human who benefits the most from these masures. discuss both ideas and say your oponion.

Conservative measures have been undertaken in recent years, more intensively,
due to
ever-rising
concern
Fix the agreement mistake
concerns
show examples
regarding the environment. Some approve of
this
notion, including me, that human benefits from a healthy environment and wildlife, the most in all aspects. Yet, there are opponents to
this
approach, too. As we live
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
planet
Earth
, we cannot consider
us
Correct pronoun usage
ourselves
show examples
detached from the rest. There is a statement that portrays human life in a cycle in which two other components, including habitat and wild
animals
Add the comma(s)
,animals
show examples
are involved.
This
means that our health is not separated from that
two
Change preposition
of two
show examples
others. The concept of " One Health" released by "WHO" is pointing out to it.
for example
, in the case of
Covid
Correct article usage
the Covid
show examples
epidemics
Fix the agreement mistake
epidemic
show examples
, it is more tangible and obvious how our interventions led to
such
a global disaster. To add more, as human
being
Fix the agreement mistake
beings
show examples
, we are responsible for other species and living beings. The more we are involved
to
Change preposition
in
show examples
preservative actions, the better we feel. Everything is connected energetically,
as a result
, our
behavior
Change the spelling
behaviour
show examples
towards
environment
Correct article usage
the environment
show examples
and animals will get back to us. If we want to have healthy emotional and
mind
Replace the word
mental
show examples
status, we need to be
caregiver
Fix the agreement mistake
caregivers
show examples
.
This
planet
along with
all its residents is alive. so, if we continue our detrimental intervention and
destroying
Wrong verb form
destroy
show examples
our
home
Fix the agreement mistake
homes
show examples
, it surely
responses
Replace the word
respond
show examples
and we would be
most
Correct article usage
the most
show examples
affected victims among
other
Change the word
our
show examples
counterparts. As you
se
Correct your spelling
see
, people who are engaged in environmentally-friendly projects, seem to be happier and more positive with high spirits. Some people
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
may counter that as it is not their business to care about where they live.
This
group of people consider the
Earth
not alive and are busier with
short term
Add a hyphen
short-term
show examples
profits and are merely materialistic. In fact,
that is
not the case as even they are wrong about their benefits. Nowadays, we can see that their actions and exploitation of
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
wild animals and
earth
Correct article usage
the earth
show examples
is becoming more
sever
Correct your spelling
severe
show examples
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
show examples
may have side effects and harmful impact on their lives and
beloveds’
Change noun form
beloveds
show examples
ones.
All
Change preposition
With all
show examples
above, it is advisable to take all conservation plans and
action
Fix the agreement mistake
actions
show examples
into great consideration. because apart from merits to other beings, we are the most affected by the health of
Earth
both physically and mentally.
Submitted by selkghaffari on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: