some people belive that conservation methods are onlyy good for wild animals and enviroment. others think it is the human who benefits the most from these masures. discuss both ideas and say your oponion.
Conservative measures have been undertaken in recent years, more intensively,
due to
ever-rising concern
regarding the environment. Some approve of Fix the agreement mistake
concerns
this
notion, including me, that human benefits from a healthy environment and wildlife, the most in all aspects. Yet, there are opponents to this
approach, too.
As we live in
planet Change preposition
on
Earth
, we cannot consider us
detached from the rest. There is a statement that portrays human life in a cycle in which two other components, including habitat and wild Correct pronoun usage
ourselves
animals
are involved. Add the comma(s)
,animals
This
means that our health is not separated from that two
others. The concept of " One Health" released by "WHO" is pointing out to it. Change preposition
of two
for example
, in the case of Covid
Correct article usage
the Covid
epidemics
, it is more tangible and obvious how our interventions led to Fix the agreement mistake
epidemic
such
a global disaster.
To add more, as human being
, we are responsible for other species and living beings. The more we are involved Fix the agreement mistake
beings
to
preservative actions, the better we feel. Everything is connected energetically, Change preposition
in
as a result
, our behavior
towards Change the spelling
behaviour
environment
and animals will get back to us. If we want to have healthy emotional and Correct article usage
the environment
mind
status, we need to be Replace the word
mental
caregiver
. Fix the agreement mistake
caregivers
This
planet along with
all its residents is alive. so, if we continue our detrimental intervention and destroying
our Wrong verb form
destroy
home
, it surely Fix the agreement mistake
homes
responses
and we would be Replace the word
respond
most
affected victims among Correct article usage
the most
other
counterparts. As you Change the word
our
se
, people who are engaged in environmentally-friendly projects, seem to be happier and more positive with high spirits.
Some peopleCorrect your spelling
see
,
may counter that as it is not their business to care about where they live. Remove the comma
apply
This
group of people consider the Earth
not alive and are busier with short term
profits and are merely materialistic. In fact, Add a hyphen
short-term
that is
not the case as even they are wrong about their benefits. Nowadays, we can see that their actions and exploitation of the
wild animals and Correct article usage
apply
earth
is becoming more Correct article usage
the earth
sever
Correct your spelling
severe
that
may have side effects and harmful impact on their lives and Correct pronoun usage
which
beloveds’
ones.
Change noun form
beloveds
All
above, it is advisable to take all conservation plans and Change preposition
With all
action
into great consideration. because apart from merits to other beings, we are the most affected by the health of Fix the agreement mistake
actions
Earth
both physically and mentally.Submitted by selkghaffari on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...