You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilities for shoppers could be improved. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: say in general what you like about shopping in your area say what is wrong with the facilities suggest how they can be improved

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Dear Sir or Madam My name is Saber Youcef, I am a local resident, I have been living here for over 10 years and I am writing
this
letter to propose some suggestions about our shopping centres. First of all, I would like to give credit to shop owners for assuring that all kinds of goods that residents might need are available, I have never been in shortage of any product;
however
, I have to express my dissatisfaction with the delivery services and the main reason for
that is
the delay that constantly happens.
Moreover
, most shops close early in the evening, if someone had to work overtime, he might find most shops close by the time he gets home. To address
this
, owners have to work together to tackle these issues and improve the quality of their services,
for instance
, buying new cars for their delivery services
as well as
recruiting new workers to stay open in late evenings. If you require
further
information, do not hesitate to contact me Yours faithfully Saber Youcef.
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