Your work in a company has come changes and you need to take a training course. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter, you should: What you have done about your work last year What you could have done better What kind of training you want to take next year?

Dear Mr Ali, My name is Ahsan, and I am working as a marketing officer at your firm. The reason I write
this
is to inform you that my responsibilities have changed and that you have given me new responsibilities. I want training sessions for familiarization with my new duties. I have been a very hardworking employee at your association for the
last
5 years.
However
, I had been working as an advertising manager for the
last
year.
Last
year the company earned huge profits from excellent advertising.
Moreover
, I have good experience in advertising. I narrate that if I were working as an advertising manager, the firm would earn more profit in the upcoming year. Because I had new plans related to the advertisement ,with the help of
this
, our company will flourish. As per company requirements, the association appointed me as a marketing manager.
However
, I do have not much experience in marketing, but with the help of some assistance and training, I will do it. I want a few training classes related to
this
duty. I hope I will never let you down. Yours sincerely, XYZ
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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