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The Chart Shows the Components of GDP in The Uk from 1992 to 2000.

The Chart Shows the Components of GDP in The Uk from 1992 to 2000.
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The bar chart illustrates the information about Gross Domestic Product(
GDP
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) From the IT and
Service
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Industry
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 of the UK for eight years from 1992 to 2000.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 most of the
GDP
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 depends upon the IT
industry
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 of the UK.As the IT
industry
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 was producing more
GDP
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 than the
Service
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industry
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 every year .
In contrast
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,in a specific year both had approximately the same
GDP
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.
However
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, Calculations had been labelled in percentages. In terms of the
GDP
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 of the IT
industry
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 ,in the , beginning the IT
industry
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 had a
GDP
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 of around 6% in 1992
while
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 the
Service
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industry
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 had a
GDP
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 of 4 % in the same year 1992
whereas
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 in 1998 it was half of both
industry
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's
GDP
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 as compared to 2000
GDP
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 because IT and
Service
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industry
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 both had doubled their
GDP
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 in just eight years from 6% to approximately 15% and from 4% to about 8% respectively.
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, in 1998 it was the period when the IT
industry
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's
GDP
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 had a very sharp increase of 4% from 8% to directly 12% as compared to the
Service
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industry
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's
GDP
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 which had remained the same in the years 1996,1998 and 2000 as between 7% and 8%

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp, service, industry with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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