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Government should regulate the level of violence in films in the television and in cinema. Some think they should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, watching
movies
 with
violence
 has emerged as a controversial topic.
Although
 some believe that it should be free, I side with those who feel that violent scenes in
movies
 should get regulated by the government. On the
one
 side, it is argued the level of
violence
 does not need to be monitored. Those in favour of
this
 idea think that some
people
 like aggressive
movies
, and usually before starting the movie, there is a warning that warns
this
 movie has violent scenes,
as a result
, those who do not like to watch
such
movies
 can turn off the television.
Moreover
, everybody knows that they are watching a movie.
Besides
 that, more aggressive behaviours are taking place in our real life every day.
In addition
 to
this
, they believe that
one
 of the best ways that
people
 can release their anger is by watching violent
movies
, so it would be useful for lowering the level of rage in society .
However
, Watching invasive
movies
 contribute to several problems. It can affect the personality of
people
, especially children.
This
 is a fact that by repeating
one
 behaviour, the sensitivity to it could decrease.
For example
, when a child is frequently watching
movies
 where
people
 are hitting and killing each other, they become desensitised to those aggressive actions. In other words, they accept it as normal behaviour.
Therefore
, they try to copy those in their real lives, which could put them in legal trouble.
In addition
 to
this
, it has been seen that in several
movies
one
 actor or actress has been injured or killed
while
 playing these scenes.
thus
, it seems that government make a rule about the
violence
 levels in the
movies
 and does not let
movies
 with aggressive behaviours be displayed. In conclusion,
although
 violent
movies
 are at the centre of the attention of some
people
 and decrease the anger of society, they could have destructive effects on children and even harms players. I strongly believe government should regulate the level of
violence
 in
movies
.
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