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Government should regulate the level of violence in films in the television and in cinema. Some think they should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, watching
movies
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 with
violence
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 has emerged as a controversial topic.
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 some believe that it should be free, I side with those who feel that violent scenes in
movies
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 should get regulated by the government. On the
one
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 side, it is argued the level of
violence
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 does not need to be monitored. Those in favour of
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 idea think that some
people
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 like aggressive
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, and usually before starting the movie, there is a warning that warns
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 movie has violent scenes,
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, those who do not like to watch
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movies
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 can turn off the television.
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, everybody knows that they are watching a movie.
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 that, more aggressive behaviours are taking place in our real life every day.
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 to
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, they believe that
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 of the best ways that
people
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 can release their anger is by watching violent
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, so it would be useful for lowering the level of rage in society .
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, Watching invasive
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 contribute to several problems. It can affect the personality of
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, especially children.
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 is a fact that by repeating
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 behaviour, the sensitivity to it could decrease.
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, when a child is frequently watching
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 where
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 are hitting and killing each other, they become desensitised to those aggressive actions. In other words, they accept it as normal behaviour.
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, they try to copy those in their real lives, which could put them in legal trouble.
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, it has been seen that in several
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one
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 actor or actress has been injured or killed
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 playing these scenes.
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, it seems that government make a rule about the
violence
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 levels in the
movies
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 and does not let
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 with aggressive behaviours be displayed. In conclusion,
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 violent
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 are at the centre of the attention of some
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 and decrease the anger of society, they could have destructive effects on children and even harms players. I strongly believe government should regulate the level of
violence
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 in
movies
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • vulnerable audiences
  • censorship
  • societal norms
  • self-regulation
  • freedom of expression
  • artistic creativity
  • viewer discretion advisories
  • cultural homogenization
  • graphic content
  • mental health impact
  • homicidal tendencies
  • audience responsibility
  • filmmakers' rights
  • content warnings
  • government intervention
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