Children should go school or teach at home. Discuss both aspects and give your opinion.
Over recent decades, some people have been trying to educate their
juveniles
at home
. While
there are some advantages to keeping their children
at home
, I personally believe the disadvantages are far more.
On the one hand, some families would prefer to educate their juveniles
at home
by themselves. They maybe choose to make a decision in order to their house is far away from the school. For example
, if they live suburbs, they will not be able to send them to educational institutes. So they are forced to keep them at home
and in their opinion, their children
could be trained in real-life and usual house working. They also
believe that parents can keep their children
safe in society.
On the other hand
, there are those who subscribe to the view that educating without a teacher has some drawbacks. They argue that in the modern technological world of today, juveniles
should attend society. The school, doing exercise with their peers, going to the library and ..., for instance
. Children
play vital roles in the future of their country. Under no circumstances should the parents encourage their children
about teaching by themselves. Teachers, who have trained, are in the schools. They also
mention that the children
are interested in continuing their studies and achieving the best education levels and positions for future jobs.
In conclusion, although
there are some advantages to educating juveniles
at home
, I personally argue that the disadvantages are far more. Self-confidence and independence are two decisive factors which everyone should consider.Submitted by s_karimi2002 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite