The pie chart and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000

The pie chart and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000
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The
overall
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value and sources of
fish
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imported to the United States in the
years
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1988, 1992 and 2000 are shown in the table and pie charts.
Overall
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, the sum amount(in
billion
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dollars
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) of
fish
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imported to the US increased from 1988 to 2000. Canada is the main source of
fish
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in 1988,
while
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other countries were the main source in the remaining
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. The value of
fish
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started at 6.57
billion
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dollars
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in 1988,
then
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increased by almost 2
billion
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dollars
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in 1992. In 2000, it
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increased in value and reached 10.72
billion
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dollars
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. Canada, China and other countries are listed as the sources of
fish
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imported to the US. Canada was the most country to import
fish
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in 1998 with a percentage of 60%.
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this
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, it decreased by almost half in both
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.
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, other countries accounted for 27% in the first year, before constituting just under 50% of the total sources in the following
years
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. China,
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, increased slightly throughout the
years
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accounting for 13%, 20%, and 30% in the
years
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1988, 1992, and 2000 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, years, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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