the chart below show the distribytion of the world water and the use of water in three countries
The pie charts describe the distribution of
water
in the world, while
the bar chart gives information regarding the use
of water
in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada.
Overall
, the world's water
is mostly salt water
and not fresh. This
freshwaterwater
is mostly found in ice and glaciers. Egypt and Saudi Arabia Correct your spelling
freshwater water
use
mostly water
for agricultural use
while
Canada for industrial use
.
Salt
Correct your spelling
Saltwater
water
constitutes 97% of water
on our planet but only 3% is fresh Add an article
the water
water
. Fresh water
is mostly found in ice and glaciers 79%. Then
ground
Correct your spelling
groundwater
water
and surface water
constitute the remaining sources by 20% and 1% respictively
.
Egypt and Saudi Arabia show similar patterns of Correct your spelling
respectively
use
of water
with just under 80% for agriculture, and
just above 10% for domestic Correct word choice
apply
use
, and 10% or less for industry purposes. However
, Canada shows an opposite trend with almost 80% of the water
used for industry, then
around 10% for both farming and local use
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