In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, most

people

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countryside areas to continue their lives in

cities

as a result

of

this

population in rural places is decreasing in many countries. I believe that it is a negative development

due to

the problems it can cause,

such

as overpopulation in

cities

and nutrition problems in society.

However

, the development of countryside areas is important for the improvement of food production because the vast majority of rural

people

work on farms. If many

people

start to move from these areas, the amount of food production will decrease and it will cause food scarcity in the country which

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will not only affect the number of foods that have been produced but

also

there will be

a

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fall in the quality of foods. Lack of quality will have a negative effect on the improvement of children.

For example

, there will be a fall in the

amount

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of vitamins that mother's milk contains, in

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results

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newborn babies will be less developed

people

. Another reason why I argue that

this

situation is a drawback for countries is because the

cities

will be more overcrowded places and that will damage the world's ecosystem.

However

, in our modern world overpopulation is the main reason for air pollution,

for instance

, the usage of more cars in the

cities

is polluting the weather.

This

could be seen as a tiny problem by society but these types of problems can create a snowball effect.

For example

, air pollution is one of the main causes of the global problem

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climate change. In conclusion, the massive move of rural

people

from the countryside to

cities

is a huge drawback and in my opinion, it should be considered as a negative development.