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In the future, nobody will buy printed books or newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying? To what extent, do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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books
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 in the future, I completely agree
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that they will only
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 internet resources not only helps them in their social life but
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This
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books
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 from any place. These are only some of the reasons why I believe that
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 I believe online materials will be more popular in the future is
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 price difference between online and printed
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 not only give easy access to them from any place but
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 amount of money for publishing their
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 on different apps and websites which makes prices lower than printed
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, there is an online shopping market called Amazon Kindle
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people
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 to publish and sell their
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only
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 amount of fee. In summary, online
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 are more achievable and budget- friendly and
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • printed books
  • newspapers
  • online reading
  • digital content
  • paywall
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-saving
  • environmental impact
  • traditional reading experience
  • ownership
  • personal connection
  • reliability
  • credibility
  • digital divide
  • accessibility issues
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