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In the future, nobody will buy printed books or newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying? To what extent, do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #books #newspapers
There are several ways of reaching
information
.
While
 some
people
 say that
people
 will continue to
reading
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read
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books
 and
newspapers
 in the future, I completely agree
with
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apply
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that they will only
use
 online sources. One of these reasons is that it gives
people
 access to
information
 everywhere. Accessibility
of
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to
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 internet resources not only helps them in their social life but
also
 in their work life.
This
 allows them to reach a great deal of
information
 without less effort.
This
 is the
reason
 why
people
 tend to
use
 different apps from their smartphones.
For example
, an app called iBooks
in
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on
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 Apple phones allows
people
 to e-
books
 buy many popular
books
 from any place. These are only some of the reasons why I believe that
people
 will
use
 online things. Another
reason
 I believe online materials will be more popular in the future is
that
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 price difference between online and printed
newspapers
 and
books
. Online
books
 and
newspapers
 not only give easy access to them from any place but
also
 they are more affordable. The
reason
 for
that is
 authors do not have to print and
use
 money for publishing their
books
 and
newspapers
. Writers should only have to pay
little
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 amount of money for publishing their
books
 on different apps and websites which makes prices lower than printed
newspapers
 and
books
.
For example
, there is an online shopping market called Amazon Kindle
books
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Books
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enables
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that enables
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people
 to publish and sell their
books
 in
this
 market
only
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for only
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 with
little
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a little
the little
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 amount of fee. In summary, online
books
 and
newspapers
 are more achievable and budget- friendly and
this
 is the
reason
 why
people
 will only
use
 online resources for reaching
an
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information
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information
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • printed books
  • newspapers
  • online reading
  • digital content
  • paywall
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-saving
  • environmental impact
  • traditional reading experience
  • ownership
  • personal connection
  • reliability
  • credibility
  • digital divide
  • accessibility issues
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