The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the
amount
of tourists who visited a Caribbean Change the quantifier
number
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, there is a significant rise in the number of total visits made by the guests to this
island
over the 7-year period. The most dramatic increase was seen in the figures for visitors
staying on cruise
ships
.
In 2010, totally
, more than 1 Change the word
total
million
people
visited this
island
. While
more than 0.5 million
people
preferred to spend their time inside of
the Change preposition
apply
island
, visitors
who stayed on cruise
ships
were only around 0.3 million
in that year.
During 7 years, demand for this
island
was
increased significantly and Unnecessary verb
apply
total
number of visits reached 3.5 Correct article usage
the total
million
in 2017. Guests of
the Caribbean who wanted to stay on Change preposition
in
island
increased slightly but compared to Add an article
the island
the
2010, the amount of these Change the article
apply
people
was
less than Change the verb form
were
visitors
who stayed on cruise
ships
, with the amount of 1.5 million
. By 2017, the figures for visitors
staying on cruise
ships
had risen to 2 million
people
.Submitted by aslanlijavidan on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, cruise, ships, million, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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