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Even though globalization affects the world`s economics in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.

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We must acknowledge that there exist not only positive effects but
also
 negative ones concerning
globalization
 and its worldwide impact.
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 will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, dependence among unequal countries might lead to an imbalance of economic, social, or health issues. It might even be a reason for conflicts and resentment.
For instance
, the need to provide necessary drugs could result in disadvantages for one country
while
 pushing high prices.
Moreover
, there is evidence of negative impacts on climate change and environmental pollution increased by
globalization
. To illustrate, carbon emissions gradually rise from booming industries and transportation.
On the other hand
, advocates argue that the beneficial effects of
globalization
 on the world´s wealth are remarkable. The fact of
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 distribution of economic shares can hardly be denied. Third-world countries get the chance to improve technologies and gain more participation.
Therefore
, unemployment levels decrease and inhabitants suffer less from health and nutrition problems. Eventually, not only will migration rates drop
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on the contrary
also
 cultural understanding will take place simultaneously.
Although
 you can find pros and cons for both opinions, human nature seems to consist of
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successive development: stepping back to how it used to be in the past is a pleasant illusion, and will not eventuate.
Overall
, I am convinced that there are always
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 sides to a coin; every innovation will result in improvements
as well as
 in some adverse effects. In my book,
globalization
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 one of the most significant
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 in the world’s wealth and a desirable future.
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