Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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These days, many individuals get stuck with not having enough sleep.
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managing and creating a proper environment for sleeping. Evidently, misremembering and tiredness in daily working are tended to be the symptoms of deficiency in sleeping. Because, if these people don't rest enough and don't sleep properly during the night, they will not remember so much
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things that they have learned before and
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they will not be able to do their
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so well for the next days.
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makes them hard to memories well and
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exhausted in doing their activities. To recapitulate
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of memory and
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working daily are both results of
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in sleeping. Of course, managing
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and making a comfortable environment for bedtime
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significant for having a healthy habit of sleep and can be solutions for
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sleep deficiency. If individuals sleep and wake up at the same
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if they reduce lights, screens, and sounds, they will get a full
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sleep and will rest enough.
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make a good
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sleeping. So
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can give great results and can
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in sleeping. In conclusion, criticising people
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not getting enough sleep becomes common these days.
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of remembering and not performing daily activities effectively. And
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management and changing the environment of sleeping in to better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Insomnia
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Sleep disorders
  • Sleep quality
  • Fatigue
  • Exhaustion
  • Restless
  • Restorative sleep
  • REM sleep
  • Circadian rhythm
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Napping
  • Sleep duration
  • Melatonin
  • Sleep-inducing
  • Drowsiness
  • Sleep disturbances
  • Obstructive sleep apnea
  • Snoring
  • Sleepwalking
  • Sleep talking
  • Shift work
  • Sleeping pills
  • Sleep aid
  • Relaxation techniques
  • Meditation
  • Deep breathing
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