Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, many individuals get stuck with not having enough sleep.
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essay
will discuss the two problems that
caused by Correct pronoun usage
apply
lack
of sleep, which they
are Correct pronoun usage
apply
weakness
of both memory and daily performance activities. Add an article
a weakness
the weakness
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also
discuss
the solutions Change the verb form
discusses
of
these issues, Change preposition
to
that
Correct word choice
apply
they
are Correct pronoun usage
which
time
managing and creating a proper environment for sleeping.
Evidently, misremembering and tiredness in daily working are tended to be the symptoms of deficiency in sleeping. Because, if these people don't rest enough and don't sleep properly during the night, they will not remember so much the
things that they have learned before and Change preposition
of the
also
they will not be able to do their works
so well for the next days. Fix the agreement mistake
work
For example
, many college students skip their nighttime sleeping
in order to do well in their exams, Replace the word
sleep
so
Correct word choice
apply
that
makes them hard to memories well and Correct pronoun usage
which
feeling
exhausted in doing their activities. To recapitulateWrong verb form
feel
that
, Correct pronoun usage
apply
lack
of memory and in
working daily are both results of Change preposition
apply
lack
in sleeping.
Of course, managing time
and making a comfortable environment for bedtime are
significant for having a healthy habit of sleep and can be solutions for Change the verb form
is
the
sleep deficiency. If individuals sleep and wake up at the same Correct article usage
apply
time
in the same place, and also
if they reduce lights, screens, and sounds, they will get a full night
sleep and will rest enough. Change noun form
night's
For instance
, students that have a regular schedule of bedtime and they
make a good Correct pronoun usage
apply
circumstance
, they'll have Fix the agreement mistake
circumstances
less
issues Change the quantifier
fewer
of
sleeping. So Change preposition
apply
time
management and creating a proper situation for resting and sleeping,
can give great results and can Remove the comma
apply
also
avoid the problems that might cause due to
deficient
in sleeping.
In conclusion, criticising people Replace the word
deficiency
about
not getting enough sleep becomes common these days. Change preposition
for
This
essay
argued the problems that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
caused
by not having enough rest and sleep, which Add a missing verb
are caused
they
are Correct pronoun usage
apply
lack
of remembering and not performing daily activities effectively. And Correct article usage
a lack
this
essay
argued the solutions that can be done about lack
of sleep, which they
are Correct pronoun usage
apply
time
management and changing the environment of sleeping in to better.Submitted by bashdar.hussen on
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