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Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree/disagree?

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Nowadays, passing
exams
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 only seem to be getting harder and so, it is believed that students should spend more time learning how to pass tests
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 of spending time learning
skills
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 like cooking and dressing.
This
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 essay will provide reasons why I disagree with
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 statement. 
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 with, acquiring life
skills
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 are important for survival. Because, without them, you wouldn't survive for long as the quality of your life doesn't only depend on
exams
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. A person needs to be able and capable of taking care of themselves more than they need to know how to pass
exams
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. To give an example, learning how to cook and clean up after one's self provides you with the
skills
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 to lead a functional adult life. To continue, learning how to dress allows individuality and creativity to be born,
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, it results in students expressing themselves
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 provides a boost to their confidence.
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, creativity is a vital tool even if it starts with something as simple as clothing. Because, it can develop and grow into the art of innovation which could eventually lead to inventions that
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 better the world,
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.
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, in my opinion, I disagree with the notion above as students could benefit forming being taught these core
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 the fact that not all professions require the logical
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 that passing
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 require, there are some that value creativity more.
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, everyone should be able to look after themselves as it is no one else's resoinsiblitiy.
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