In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study aboard. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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Education is
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essential need for all of us. Education teaches us basic manners to how to communicate, behaviours and build self-confidence to achieve our goals. Having stated that students' mindset
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to study in aboard compare to their own provincial. To be more creative and productive in the digital world era,
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may get less exposure studying at home provincial.
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extensive experience studying aboard. There are serval reasons to get more advantages studying aboard.
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, highly educated teaching staff members
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their own expertise in a particular subject.
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you get more interactive sessions, more impact of curriculum activities and lessons learnt from them
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throughout
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infrastructure as many reputed universities to get excellent Librerories, fully equipped laboratories and many more to get hands-on experience to build self-confidence. To illustrate in a recent survey, it has been taken into account that an increasing number of youth in India are taking the highest admission in
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the best college infrastructure.
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helps to develop personal growth and boost the decision-making power in any situation as you are alone in a foreign
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and
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learn how to deal with diversities belonging to different religions and cultures worldwide.
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, there are some disadvantages for students who belong to middle-class families who may not afford university fees and other expenses in
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. The second aspect is accessibility to native places. That
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impacts students who are fully responsible for family care and sometimes it is difficult to handle the situation in case of a family emergency.
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, the lengthy student visa process is
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affected to take the final decisions as a long wait to get the appointment and it may chances to get rejection if you do not have the relevant documentation. To put it in
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, it is true that study in aboard affects financial conditions.
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, I strongly opine that it is always recommended for a bright career future
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potential self-growth.
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