Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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, I stand with the former approach. This
essay will explore both views and state my own opinion about these arguments.
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advertisements
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