Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals think that it is better to accept unsatisfactory job or lack of money.
a bad circumstances
namely,Correct the article-noun agreement
bad circumstances
a bad circumstance
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an
Other
feel that it is best to try and Fix the agreement mistake
Others
ehnance
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enhance
such
situations
. In my opinion, people
should work hard in order
to improve situations
via change their jobs
, run
their own Correct word choice
and run
business
.
On the one hand, some think is better for Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
people
to accept bad situation
. They believe there Fix the agreement mistake
situations
are
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is
no thing
perfect. Correct your spelling
nothing
This
is because the unacceptable circumstances is
part of our life and should accept. Change the verb form
are
For example
, the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
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apply
people
maybe face financial burden
or Fix the agreement mistake
burdens
unsatisfied
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be unsatisfied
about
their Change preposition
with
jobs
, if they accept this
bad situation people
can feel less stress and focus in
their life rather worry too much. Change preposition
on
Consequently
, people
will become less vulnerable to develop
mental health issues namely, depression, Wrong verb form
developing
anxiety
.
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and anxiety
On the other hand
, I would like to agree with those individuals who think the improve the situations
is better than Fix the agreement mistake
situation
accpet
it. Correct your spelling
accept
To begin
with, people
who feel do not happy toward
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with
they
can do several things to Correct pronoun usage
apply
ehnace
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ease
this
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this situation
these situations
situations
. For instance
, people
can change their jobs
in order
to find positive
environment Correct article usage
a positive
such
as,
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apply
good
manager, friendly colleagues, and flexible hours Correct article usage
a good
work
, which Change preposition
of work
this
factors can makes
employees more Wrong verb form
make
happiness
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happy
toward
their Change preposition
in
jobs
instead
of accept
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accepting
the
unwilling Correct article usage
apply
situations
. Furthermore
, people
who struggle with financial aspect
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aspects
they
can run a new business in Correct pronoun usage
apply
order
to makes
a considerable amount of Change the verb
make
profits
rather Fix the agreement mistake
profit
accept
Correct word choice
than accept
lack
of money .
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a lack
To sum up
, I totally believe people
should work hard in order
to improve the bad circumstances instead
of accpet
Correct your spelling
accept
it
, they can change their workplaces or start a new business , which Correct pronoun usage
them
this
help people
to enhance bad situations
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