Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and Unhealthy. discuss both views and your opinion.

In the present age, few people assert that keeping domestic animals
such
as dogs, cats or birds are friendly for toddler
whereas
, many other argue that
pets
are harmful and unhygienic.Convincing arguments can be made that keeping
pets
is beneficial for proactive.In ,contrast some others may claim that keeping
pets
is dangerous and unhealthy.
Firstly
,
pets
act as a companion to children.
For instance
, a family is living in an area where their neighbours do not have
kids
.
Then
the child will not have any friends near their house.
This
may lead to depression. So in
this
situation. Keeping
pets
is beneficial for
kids
.
Secondly
,
pets
protect youth whenever they are in danger.
for example
, if a person is trying to kidnap the kid
then
domestic animals especially dogs would sense it and rescue the child.
Therefore
,
pets
are harmless and protect children.
Initially
,
pets
may harm toddlers
due to
some disorder or when enough training is not given to them. To illustrate, cats have to be trained properly. Sometimes if they didn't like any person they may hurt them. If that person is a kid
then
it is very harmful to the toddler.
Moreover
, as
kids
are proactive, they may play with the
pets
which might be hurting the
pets
sometimes which leads to the reaction of
pets
towards the
kids
.
Furthermore
, if
pets
are not taken care of regularly
then
they may affect with diseases which are unhealthy for toddlers.
To Conclude
,after the aforementioned discussion, I think
pets
are beneficial and good for
kids
but they may be dangerous if they are not taken care So
pets
should be trained well and maintained.
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