An increasing number of people want to buy clothes, shoes, and other items produced by famous international brands. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
The popularity of international brands is growing day by day and more and more people are purchasing their stuff without any need. In my opinion, it is a negative development and leads to money wastage and feels many individuals inferior. The main reason for
this
spending is their eye-catching advertisements.
To sum up
, increasing fashion makes people buy out of their pockets without realising the fact that they do not even need that many clothes or shoes. Additionally
, individuals have to also
understand that buying expensive clothes does not make them look smarter. Therefore
,some restrictions might be applied to these brands while
promoting their items.Submitted by vinder323 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite