The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

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The supplied illustration of two maps sketches out

university

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the university

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leisure centre in 1990 and its appearance nowadays.

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, it is obvious that

cafe

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the cafe

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and reception which are located on the north of the map has remained untouched,

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the other major part of

centre

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the centre

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has accomplished considerable changes. It is conspicuous that in the past there used to be a park on the northwest of the complex,

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now there has been lined up a basketball court

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of it.

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, right under the basketball

court

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,court

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there is seen a tennis court which was located

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the southeast in 1990 and now occupies the former car park's place. It could be plainly viewed that by

90's

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'90s

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students had

outdoor

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the outdoor

an outdoor

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pool to rest in their free time,

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present

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the present

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time

outdoor

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the outdoor

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pool is substituted by

indoor

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the indoor

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pool. As

aforemetioned

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aforementioned

, the cafe and the reception

has

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have

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remained untouched.

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, there is a changing room on the southeast of the construction and down to it a fitness centre.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

166 words

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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

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