The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.
The supplied illustration of two maps sketches out
university
leisure centre in 1990 and its appearance nowadays.
Correct article usage
the university
Overall
, it is obvious that cafe
and reception which are located on the north of the map has remained untouched, Correct article usage
the cafe
while
the other major part of centre
has accomplished considerable changes.
It is conspicuous that in the past there used to be a park on the northwest of the complex, Add an article
the centre
however
now there has been lined up a basketball court instead
of it. Moreover
, right under the basketball court
there is seen a tennis court which was located Add a comma
,court
on
the southeast in 1990 and now occupies the former car park's place.
It could be plainly viewed that by Change preposition
in
90's
students had Fix apostrophe usage
'90s
outdoor
pool to rest in their free time, Add an article
the outdoor
an outdoor
whereas
in present
time Correct article usage
the present
outdoor
pool is substituted by Add an article
the outdoor
indoor
pool. As Add an article
the indoor
aforemetioned
, the cafe and the reception Correct your spelling
aforementioned
has
remained untouched. Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Furthermore
, there is a changing room on the southeast of the construction and down to it a fitness centre.Submitted by amina07id on
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