Task 2: Some people think secondary school students should learn international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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recent times, social networking has
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people in
such
a way that everyone can get access to any
information
and know the newest
news
. Many individuals believe that
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pupils
in secondary schools should be studied international
news
as one of their classes,
while
others consider that
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only a waste of time, and I partially agree with
this
statement. The objective of
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the pros and cons of
children
learning other
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countries'
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news
. On the one hand, being aware of fresh global
news
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the development of the child.
This
means that students being taught worldwide
information
would have the ability
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as
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critical thinking.
For instance
, teachers who teach them
this
subject may
also
teach them how to solve
this
wide-ranging issue.
Consequently
, students will attempt to think wider to find a solution or just
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of that
news
.
On the other hand
,
this
can be an additional burden for
children
.
In other words
,
children
are already loaded with studies and giving them extra classes to teach international
news
will only complicate the student's life and overload their brains with unnecessary
information
. As an example of
this
,
while
doing their homework
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people
may think about that country's
news
and
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on a subject
that is
more important than
this
,
such
as mathematics or history.
Therefore
,
children
should be focused on subjects that are essential for their studies and their level of knowledge will be improved.
To sum up
, all the aforementioned points
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other
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news
is just infusing irrelevant
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children
. As far as I am concerned, if the
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undergraduates
had been educated only
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subjects, the level of education would noticeably grow.
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