the environmental problems that today world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation.so governments and large organisations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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environmental problems are the greatest threat not only to humans but to the entire

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. In my opinion governments and large organisations should be responsible

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reducing the amount of damage being done

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ordinary people play a vital role without which any effort will go

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, it's important to understand that our

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has never been in

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a degraded state as it is today and it's a major cause is

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human population and activities. With an increasing number of

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we are exploiting more natural resources to meet the needs. Authorities, companies individuals must come together to not only create awareness and work together for the implementation of tasks and activities to improve the situation.

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, reducing carbon footprints, less use of fossil fuels, aforestation and many more.

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, the regime of the countries must make environmental laws and policies for institutions and individuals.

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, subsidies on electric cars and two-wheelers, exemption of tax on recycling plastic and mandatory tree plantation work for all adults.

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will create a sense of awareness and active participation from all, for the protection of our

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individuals and ordinary people must be involved and trained in activities that can

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educate others and bring them to actively participate in reviving our ecology.

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, it's very clear that it's a tantamount task to protect the

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. Public and private institutions

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all members of society will come together for a greener future.