Science can increase people's lifespan for up to 100 years. There are projections that science may further increase the lifespan to 200 years. Is this a good or a bad thing? Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
Some scientific projections indicate that people will live for up to two hundred
years
. One then
wonders if this
is good or bad. This
essay will discuss both views and agree with the opinion that living over 100 years
is not a good idea as it increases state budgets for the elderly who are weak and require support or care
.
To begin
with, the idea that living very long is noble is supported by individuals who value the wisdom and experience of those who are aged. The aged can help in solving life problems with their experiences. Culture and history are also
preserved as grandparents continue to share them with young people. For example
, many studies state that European nations have managed to conserve their cultures due to
the proliferation of adult populations (owing to scientific advancement) in the continent. However
, I pinpoint that the adult populations have created great distress on the financial budgets of European nations.
On the other hand
, therefore
, it is more justifiable to believe that science increasing the lifespan of individuals is a bad thing. That is
because the elderly tend to lose their abilities and health as they grow older making it difficult and expensive to care
for them. Britain, for instance
, has been forced (by the huge numbers of people over 60 years
suffering from different illnesses) to outsource care
workers from Africa and other parts of the world due to
the high demand for such
professionals. Hence
, this
essay disagrees that this
is a good thing for the nation.
In conclusion, the essay concurs with the opinion that science increasing lifespan to 200 years
is a bad thing because, while
promoting the conservation of culture, it is more expensive and demanding to provide care
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