In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

In many nations, the number of people who choose to purchase introduction
food
rather than resident who choose to buy domestic
food
. In my opinion,
difference
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between technology development of other countries is the main reason that
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trend
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. Whilst, encouraging
dweller
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dwellers
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to buy local
food
should be paid attention by
government
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the government
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. It is not denied that technology can improve
quality
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and quantity of
food
.
First,
with technology equipment, the product can have a great living environment leading to the
food
clean
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and safe for
producer
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the producer
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. Harvest time can reduce so that the
food
in the market has
reasonable
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a reasonable
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price.
Moreover
, with the
unique
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of imported
food
, the
food
that
buy
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other countries
become
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popular.
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, strawberry from Japan is
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go-to choice because that more delicious than strawberry in Viet Nam. It
so
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clean and has
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a combination
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of sweetness and
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.
According to
me,
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the government
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should have
a
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policy to increase
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the awareness
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of
public
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the public
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about local
food
. Reducing a local
food
tax and
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equality
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the equality
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and quantity of
food
are
best
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way
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to tackle
this
problem.
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, some
food
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and restaurants in Vietnam apply modern equipment leading to equality and quantity are so excellent and
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trust
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for everyone.
Moreover
, decreasing
tax
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can help the value reasonable and the residents can approach essential
food
. In conclusion, it is noticeable that imported
food
has
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the belief
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belief
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beliefs
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of residents.
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, there are many
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to tackle
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issues
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and
government
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the government
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play an important role in
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domestic
food
and imported
food
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • allure
  • novelty
  • diversity
  • perception
  • premium
  • globalization
  • cuisines
  • economic factors
  • subsidies
  • tariffs
  • competitive
  • farm-to-table
  • eco-conscious
  • consumption
  • sustainability
  • local economy
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