In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

In
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recent years, There is a trend of having external
cuisine
instead
of
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domestic one. There is a multitude of reasons contributing to
this
issue, so several measures must be taken to surge the turnover of
the
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local
cuisine
. The rationales why internal
food
is not being
favored
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favoured
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in multiple countries. Where consumers are rich
of
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knowledge about international
food
, it is adored as its
tastei
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taste
is wonderful. In nations, where diseases from
foodstuff
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foodstuffs
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are common and the law is loose. Customers are fond of the ingress of
food
due to
the
sanitory
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sanitary
problem.
Finally
, foreign
food
is being consumed widely
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the world because of the reasonable price.
This
may come from
the
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improved trade, better life quality or the production cost
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more affordable. In order to
rise
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the turnover of the internal
cuisine
, authorities should impose higher
tax
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taxes
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to
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external
food
. Importers have to increase the price, and
this
may lead to the lack of desire of the
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sensitive
consumers to buy those products. Surging the tax has to be carried out
along with
encouraging citizens to support the local
food producing
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food-producing
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business.
For instance
,The markets and exhibitions displaying the internal
cuisine
contribute to changing people’s
opinion
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opinions
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about these kinds of items. In
conslusion
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conclusion
, the
food
imported from foreign countries is getting more and more popular and the local
cuisine
may get replaced.
However
, we can prevent that phenomenon, by by
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higher
tariff
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tariffs
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and
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the residents to
switching
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from
extenal
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external
food
to internal one.
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