The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007.

The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007.
A glance at the provided table reveals the international notebook market share for companies in
two
years (2006 and 2007).
Overall
, it is evident that HP, Dell and Toshiba were the brands whose percentage increased throughout
two
years,
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: Acer, Lenovo and Fujitsu-Seimens and so on, declined in their market shares. To commence with the first four producers,
according to
the table, their market shares in 2007 were 1-4% more than that in 2006, except for Acer decreased from 11.6% to 10.7%. Regarding HP and Dell, there were significant rises, to somewhere in the vicinity of 3.5% over
two
years. From 31.4% to 34% for HP and from 16.6 to 20.2% for Dell. These
two
brands were followed by a slight rise (about 1.1%) in the percentage of Toshiba (from 6.2% to 7.3%). With regard to the other notebook companies,
it is clear that
Fujitsu-Seimens dropped considerably from 4.8% to 2.3%,
while
Lenovo only fell 0.4% (from 6.6% to 6.2%). Other manufacturers decreased from 22.8% to 19.3% from 2006 to 2007.
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