Over the last few decades, the media has promoted the image of young thin women as being ideal. What problems has this caused? What solutions can you suggest to this issue?

In
this
present era, everyone wants to look beautiful or handsome. We can say that the
media
plays a vital role in encouraging men and women to look thin and gorgeous. Especially teenagers are too motivated by them. The following paragraphs contain the side effects
due to
this
promotion and possible solutions for how we can overcome
this
situation. For a long time, electronic
media
has shown that young
girls
look more beautiful when their
body
structure is slim and smart. In every drama and film, they cast the slimmest
girls
for acting and modelling. It is not only in Asian countries but
also
in European countries as well. The Barbie doll film is one of the best examples because in
this
film, Barbie's
body
is too thin and she looks beautiful.
As a result
,
girls
want to look like the same drama queen, and they prefer to stick to diet plans and avoid eating healthy food. Owing to
this
, different diseases attack them;
for example
, weakness and low blood pressure are common.
On the other hand
, the government should take action and instruct the
media
to stop
this
promotion.
Moreover
, with the help of the
media
, the government should start a campaign about a healthy and strong
body
.
Furthermore
, parents
also
want to keep their daughters away from diet plans for a healthy life and encourage them that health is more important than disease. Young
girls
also
need to motivate themselves because a healthy
body
always gives you a healthy mind.
To conclude
, the
media
set that thin
body
as an ideal for
girls
because producers prefer too-slim
girls
in their dramas and films. The image of a tinny
body
is good for
girls
.
However
, it is totally wrong because many
girls
have destroyed their lives to look thin. Now the
media
needs to stop the thin
body
advertisement and promote a healthy
body
to avoid
girls
from getting different diseases.
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