The charts shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart displays several difficulties in educational settings for
men
and women
British teachers
in 2019 by using percentages.
Overall
, it is noticeable that in some places women
teachers
involving with young children far more than men
teachers
. In contrast
, they still some areas which seem to be hardly different between both gender due to
the higher level it become.
Nursery, primary and secondary children are thought by lady teachers
rather than gentle teachers
in British
country. In 2009, almost 100% of nursery or Add an article
the British
pre-school
Correct your spelling
preschool
teachers
are female. This
shows similarities in primary school where women
teacher proportion are 9 times greater than men
teachers
. Even though secondary school represents slightly different gender proportions, females still share a higher percentage when compare to males.
Meanwhile, sexes do not play significant
role anymore in the Add an article
a significant
UK
higher educational fields Change noun form
UK's
such
as college, private training institute
and university lecturers. Surprisingly, the number of Fix the agreement mistake
institutes
men
teachers
exceed women
teacher at private
training institute and university lecturers Add an article
a private
while
remain
equally Wrong verb form
remaining
share
the same proportion in college.Wrong verb form
sharing
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