The charts shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart displays several difficulties in educational settings for
men
and
women
British
teachers
in 2019 by using percentages.
Overall
, it is noticeable that in some places
women
teachers
involving with young children far more than
men
teachers
.
In contrast
, they still some areas which seem to be hardly different between both gender
due to
the higher level it become. Nursery, primary and secondary children are thought by lady
teachers
rather than gentle
teachers
in
British
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country. In 2009, almost 100% of nursery or
pre-school
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teachers
are female.
This
shows similarities in primary school where
women
teacher proportion are 9 times greater than
men
teachers
. Even though secondary school represents slightly different gender proportions, females still share a higher percentage when compare to males. Meanwhile, sexes do not play
significant
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a significant
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role anymore in the
UK
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higher educational fields
such
as college, private training
institute
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and university lecturers. Surprisingly, the number of
men
teachers
exceed
women
teacher at
private
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training institute and university lecturers
while
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equally
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the same proportion in college.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, teachers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • educational setting
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • nursery school
  • higher education
  • proportion
  • outnumber
  • trend
  • comparison
  • historical factors
  • social influence
  • teaching profession
  • data interpretation
  • balance
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