The charts shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart displays several difficulties in educational settings for

men

and

women

British

teachers

in 2019 by using percentages.

Overall

, it is noticeable that in some places

women

teachers

involving with young children far more than

men

teachers

In contrast

, they still some areas which seem to be hardly different between both gender

due to

the higher level it become. Nursery, primary and secondary children are thought by lady

teachers

rather than gentle

teachers

British

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country. In 2009, almost 100% of nursery or

pre-school

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preschool

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teachers

are female.

This

shows similarities in primary school where

women

teacher proportion are 9 times greater than

men

teachers

. Even though secondary school represents slightly different gender proportions, females still share a higher percentage when compare to males. Meanwhile, sexes do not play

significant

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a significant

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role anymore in the

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UK's

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higher educational fields

such

as college, private training

institute

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and university lecturers. Surprisingly, the number of

men

teachers

exceed

women

teacher at

private

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a private

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training institute and university lecturers

while

remain

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remaining

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equally

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sharing

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the same proportion in college.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender distribution
educational setting
primary education
secondary education
nursery school
higher education
proportion
outnumber
trend
comparison
historical factors
social influence
teaching profession
data interpretation
balance

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