Bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years.
The presented bar graph gives information about how much
carbon
dioxide
was emitted in each country in 1975,1990 and 2005.
Overall
,it is clearly seen that the USA
and China
were the countries that emitted carbon
dioxide
the most while
the United Kingdom and Canada released carbon
dioxide
the least.The units are measured in thousand
metric tonnes
.
1975 was the year with the least carbon
dioxide
emission as in 1975.However
, it can be seen that there were more carbon
emissions
in the USA
,China
and India .From the perspective of 2005, the United Kingdom had a little bit more carbon
emissions
than in 1990.Besides
,the amount of carbon
dioxide
in India, Canada,the USA
and China
had increased while
the emission in Germany decreased.
On the other hand
, the United Kingdom and Canada were less likely to cause pollution because they emitted under 20 thousand
metric tonnes
during three different years .Germany and India had over 20 thousand
tonnes
of carbon
emissions
.The USA
emitted carbon
dioxide
the most and it emitted 1200000,1400000 and 1600000 metric tonnes
per year.China
was a country that significantly raised carbon
emissions
and 2005.It emitted about 150 thousand
metric tonnes
of carbon
dioxide
.Submitted by ms.marymay97 on
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