The table below give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
The two charts illustrate the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
sales
of fairtrade-labelled
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fair trade-labelled
coffee
and bananas
in two specific years in 5 different European countries.
Overall
, it is evident that UK
and Switzerland
had the highest turnover in both categories with remarkable
rise for Correct article usage
a remarkable
UK
in Correct article usage
the UK
coffee
and for Switzerland
in bananas
. Moreover
, all nations faced an upward trend in coffee
sales
, but in
contrast
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,contrast
Sweden
and Denmark had a decline in their figures in terms of bananas
.
In terms of coffee
, UK
is the leader with a significant 13fold rise in its share with 20 Correct article usage
the UK
millions
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million
of
euros. Change preposition
apply
Likewise
, Switzerland
doubled its quantity from 3 in 1999 to 6 millions
in 2004. Denmark’s Change to singular
million
sale
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sales
also
increased from 1.8 to 2.
Moreover
, both Belgium and Sweden
recorded a rise in their ration
with Correct your spelling
ratio
0.7
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a 0.7
millions
increase for Belgium from 1 million and Change to singular
million
0.2
Correct article usage
a 0.2
climb
for Change to a plural noun
climbs
Sweden
from 0.8milllion.
On the other hand
, Switzerland
ranked the
first in Correct article usage
apply
bananas
with
tripling its Change preposition
apply
sales
quantity from 15 to 47. In addition
, UK
increased its turnover from 1 million to 5.5 respectively and faced 5fold growth. Belgium Correct article usage
the UK
also
recorded the third place with reaching the 4 millions
ration in 2004. Unlike other countries, Denmark and Change to singular
million
Sweden
declined in their sales
quantity near
than half, 1.8 to 1 for Change preposition
by
Sweden
and 2 to 0.9 for Denmark.Submitted by mohammadmgh1381 on
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