some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Some groups of
people
say that
waste
from homes is not recycled so much. They think we can only increase
this
rate with more government regulation. I
am absolutely disagree
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with them. I think we can not
increases
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recycled
waste
amount with more government policies and it just
make
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everything worse. First and foremost, we need
free
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market and less regulation on recycling. with
less
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laws
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there will be more
company
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companies
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for recycling. there will be new ideas and new technologies for recycling and new product.
free
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market can handle it easily. and it will be better for
people
. because there will be a lot of companies and they all will want a lot of
waste
.
people
would sell their
waste
to them. win-win position. With more regulation on that
people
will not
recycled
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much more or the
waste
will not
used
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useful. In
history
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countries try
some thing
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like that and they always failed. They will just make the problem bigger. with more
rules
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we will buy
every thing
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everything
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more expensive and the problem will not handle.
for
example
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countries make new legal
requirement
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for planes because of climate change.
in
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result
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they can not handle climate change. Everything
gone
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worse and
airplane
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tickets are more expensive now. In conclusion, we can not
done
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this
with more policies and it will not be effective. We try
this
so much and always we failed. with
free
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market and
less
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rules we make new
product
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we
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found new technologies and handle the recycled problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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