The line graph below shows changes in fast food consumed in the UK between 1970 and 1990.
The graph illustrates shifts in the amount of fast
food
consumed in the UK between 1970 and 1990. Several trends are apparent. Firstly
,the UK population are eating more and more fast food
. Secondly
, the type of fast food
has changed.In 1970, the most popular fast food
was pizza. Over 300g were consumed each week. By 1990, however
, this
had fallen to just over 200g -a 50% drop. Consumption of other fast foods such
as fish and chips and hamburgers increased, however
. The number of hamburgers eaten shot up from about 20g a week to more than 270g, overtaking pizza in the late1980s. Fish and chips consumption also
increased, rising from about 80g in 1970 to 500g in 1990.Accompanying this
change in the choice of foods was an overall
increase in the amount of fast food
consumed. In 1970, British consumers ate about 450g a week of fast food
. In 1990, on the other hand
, this
had more than doubled, to almost 1000g.Submitted by galihw on
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