the chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational settings in the UK in 2010.
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chart illustrates the percentage of teachers who worked in six different sets in the UK in 2010.
In general, the number of females who worked as tutors in preschool and primary school was higher in
the younger the students are, the more women participate in the job ,however
the number of men and women was the same when it came to college education.
from primary school to secondary, The percentage of male teachers community rose promptly to around 40% Add a comma
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there was only a slight decrease for the female society about 30%.
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, there was an obvious downward in the women's teachers for the beginning years of the educational setting field and an uprise for the male state.Submitted by TUTOO on
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