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Topic: The devolopment of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think it will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken. Andvantages and disadvantages.

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The improvement of tourism contributed to
English
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language
 becoming the most prominent
one
 in the
worldwide
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. Some individuals think that it will cause to
English
turning
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turn
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 into the only
language
 to be spoken globally. I believe that speaking in
one
language
 may bring more drawbacks rather than benefits.
One
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 the
one
 hand, it has
positive
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a positive
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 influence on society.
This
 is because it helps to break
language
 barriers. Nowadays it is challenging for
young
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the young
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 generation to build a good
relationship
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relationships
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 with others. If they just use only
one
language
 to communicate with each other, it will
gives
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 them a chance to get to know
every
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one
.
In addition
 to that people who have a good knowledge of
English
 have an opportunity to travel and communicate more effectively in so many parts of
world
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the world
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.
This
also
 helps them to explore and travel confidently and to learn more about the countries and cultures
you
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they
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 visit.
On the other hand
, there are a variety of disadvantages. First of all,
population
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the population
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 lose their cultural identity. If everybody
talk
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talks
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 in the same
language
, nobody wants to learn about other nations. Because they think there is only
one
language
, as
the
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a
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 result there is not any different culture. Second of all, another
cons
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con
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 of
that is
language
 extinction. Most of the citizens work in other countries which
is
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are
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 speaking in
English
. They must speak in
English
 at their workplace and
also
 at their home. So they forgot their own mother tongue.
To sum up
,
English
 becoming
only
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the only
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language
 to
spoken
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be spoken
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 globally
it
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has so many cons than pros.
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