The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
Given two charts illustrate the numbers of comers and goers
of
Change preposition
in
UK
, Correct article usage
the UK
as well as
the countries which are mostly visited by UK
residents.
Overall
, it is clear that
,
the amount of Remove the comma
apply
UK
residents who visited to
foreign countries had outweighed others who are overseas people and visited Remove the preposition
apply
to
the Remove the preposition
apply
UK
over
20 Change preposition
for over
years
. Moreover
, due to
the second chart, France can be considered the most popular country where
Correct word choice
that
were
visited by tourists, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
as well as
Turkey had caught the last
place on this
list.
To introduce, in 1979 the numbers of people who were UK
citizens and visited to
other countries were just above 10 Remove the preposition
apply
million
; however
it continued till 1985, in the following Add a comma
,however
years
went up a
peak and showed Change preposition
to a
significantly
Change the word
significant
result
in 1999(above 50 Correct subject-verb agreement
results
million
). Whilst, the amounts of humankind who chosen
to see Wrong verb form
chose
UK
were 10 Correct article usage
the UK
million
and preserved its stability over 8 years
, and in the next 10 years
climbed just below 30 million
.
On the other hand
, France was mostly visited country by UK
citizens(approximately 11 million
); however
Turkey saw only 3 Add a comma
,however
million
tourists who came from UK
. The next country Correct article usage
the UK
where
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that
were
preferred by Correct subject-verb agreement
was
UK
overseas was Spain ( just below 10 Correct article usage
the UK
million
). The second and third place on this
list were Greece(3.5 million
) and USA(4 million
).Submitted by shabnam.aghayeva on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, years, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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