Some people claim that not enough of the waste from hojmes is recycled. they say that the only way to increase recycling is for fovernments to make it a legal requirement.

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Nowadays, it is a crucial problem that a lot of household
waste
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including some materials, which should be recycled, has been
disposed
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altogether as just refuses.
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essay will explain why I am in favour of those who argue that
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issue ought to be changed by
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governmental legislation on the basis of the current situation in our societies. On the one hand, we can see some local
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,
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encourage residents to recycle their rubbish, in many societies. They can be effective to some extent because
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society is as environmentally friendly as the
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inside which act as components.
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, in
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, citizens can have responsible weekly
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to classify the
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whether is recyclable.
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, the local
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can separate the recyclable resource from their
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and send them to appropriate places
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of throwing everything in one bin.
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, it is sadly true that a concern over unrecycled rubbish still
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a serious social issue despite
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the effort of the aforementioned
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. The reason can be attributed that modern workers tend not to have enough time to be unaffordable to play the
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in their local community considering their burden in their work. Taking
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into consideration, governments had better
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take
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responsibility
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matter rather than depending on the local units. They might be capable of providing tax
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for those who are keen on recycling, and
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, of fining those who are not supportive
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their policies implemented to help
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to recycle more. In conclusion, despite
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little influence from actions taken by local
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, there is still
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need for governments to legally regulate
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in some way so that they can
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to recycle their home
waste
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