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The devolopment of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think it will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken. Andvantages and disadvantages.

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The improvement of tourism contributed to the
English
language
 becoming the most prominent
one
 in the world. Some individuals think that it will cause to
English
 turn into the only
language
 to be spoken globally. I believe that speaking in
one
language
 may bring more drawbacks rather than benefits. On the
one
 hand, it has a positive influence on society.
This
 is because it helps to break
language
 barriers. Nowadays it is challenging for the young generation to build good relationships with others. If they just use only
one
language
 to communicate with each other, it will give them a chance to get to know everyone.
In addition
 to that people who have a good knowledge of
English
 have an opportunity to travel and communicate more effectively in so many parts of the world.
This
also
 helps them to explore and travel confidently and to learn more about the countries and cultures they visit.
On the other hand
, there are a variety of disadvantages. First of all, the population lose their cultural identity. If everybody talks in the same
language
, nobody wants to learn about other nations. Because they think there is only
one
language
.
As a result
, there is not any difference in culture. Second of all, another con of
that is
language
 extinction. Most of the citizens work in other countries which are speaking in
English
. They must speak in
English
 at their workplace and
also
 at their home. So they forgot their own mother tongue.
To sum up
,
English
 becoming the only
language
 to be spoken globally has so many cons than pros.
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