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Band 2

Buying things on the internet, such as books , air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh disadvantages?

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today
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ear
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era
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individuals
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 in terms of books,air tickets and groceries.
that
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advantage
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this
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some points. As
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a matter
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out line
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reasons
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shifted
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easly
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easily
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variable
valuable
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is make
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 people purchasing every
things
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 they want for a button
whith
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with
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diffrent
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different
choicess
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choices
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Mover
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 that could save the time of
boght
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bought
or when the
prodcts
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products
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brod
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broad
 of their country.
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alot
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a lot
 of
benfintes
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benefits
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tradtionally
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traditionally
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purchase
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purchasing
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beofore
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before
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furthermore
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cultural
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friend
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friends
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whith divarty
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with diverse
nation
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some time
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sometimes
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comminication
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communication
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population
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populations
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strongly
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conclusion
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bothe
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both
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significant in our life to be in life development and to save the sense about things.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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