Buying things on the internet, such as books , air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh disadvantages?

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in terms of books,air tickets and groceries.
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some points. As
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of fact many people
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more than traditional Methods like souqs or small shopping for several
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. for most technology was
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the life to keep it
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people purchasing every
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they want for a button
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that could save the time of
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of their country.
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the flip said there are
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things they can test
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significant in our life to be in life development and to save the sense about things.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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