The pie charts and table below show the percentage of tourists travelling to Australia and specific information regarding their staying period, accommodation and the purpose of visit.

The pie charts and table below show the percentage of tourists travelling to Australia and specific information regarding their staying period, accommodation and the purpose of visit.
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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of travellers coming to Australia and the table presents data about their journey's length, destination and the aim of travel.
It is clear that
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Asians take up the largest percentage of visitors, followed by Europeans.
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whereas
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Americans spend 16 days travelling, the opposite is true for people from Asia. As can be seen, Asian tourists are recorded to be at the top of the list with 37%, in comparison with 35% of those who are from Europe. Meanwhile, there are only 18% of individuals from America and 10% of other nationalities. Regarding other information,
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visitors from the US spend more than 2 weeks staying in camps or caravans to go swimming and sunbathing, it is likely that the Asians prefer a shorter trip with 7 days going around for sightseeing and remaining in luxurious resorts.
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, travellers from European countries are
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interested in enjoying the landscape,
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, they tend to stop over 14 days in 4-star hotels.
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, the length of stay of tourists from other regions is over a week and their main activity is surfing.
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