students should pay their full university fees themselves Do you agree or disagree?

Few topics are more important

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education

fees

, and the issue of payment will probably always be controversial. In my

opinion

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the government shall accurately pay the tuition

fees

an impractical aspiration, no matter how much we might

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the idea. The main obstacle would appear to be the number of students who are at

university

and unemployed.

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means

,

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they do not have money to pay for shelter and other needs, especially those

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from

poverity

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poverty

families.

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, if states do not help

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financially, most of them will leave

university

and find a career,

consequently

; that country would not develop

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and

then

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. As it would always need

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doctors and teachers from other countries.

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, these painful lessons are shown by states

such

as Sweden where

this

appears to be the case. To supporters of the idea, these benefits are convincing. A

further

issue is that most pupils may face stress and academic problem.

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is because almost all of them are going to have a job if they have not been provided

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monthly

fees

by

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.

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, they may be can not balance the lectures in the morning and

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in the evening.

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leading

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have

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pressure and heath case, accumulates by

homeworks

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homework

and lectures, and even

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low

marke

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marks

due to

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limited

on time for studying and

prapering

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preparing

well.

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instance,

the

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research

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oxford

university

showed that

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students

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academically failed because they have a job after their return from the

university

.

This

argument

also

appears to be quite powerful. It is true that there are some positives to students

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themselve

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themselves

, most notably the improver their

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personality

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and be

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. Despite

this

, it seems that for many adolescent people, these pleasures are outweighed by issues which can cause stress and depression.

To conclude

, the problems of health, stress, and

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poverty

combine together to make education

fees

a challenging and potentially difficult time for many.

This

is not to say that all young people suffer in

this

way, but it appears to be the case very frequently.