students should pay their full university fees themselves Do you agree or disagree?

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, and the issue of payment will probably always be controversial. In my
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the government shall accurately pay the tuition
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an impractical aspiration, no matter how much we might
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the idea. The main obstacle would appear to be the number of students who are at
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and unemployed.
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they do not have money to pay for shelter and other needs, especially those
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from
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poverty
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, if states do not help
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financially, most of them will leave
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; that country would not develop
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doctors and teachers from other countries.
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appears to be the case. To supporters of the idea, these benefits are convincing. A
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.
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, they may be can not balance the lectures in the morning and
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in the evening.
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pressure and heath case, accumulates by
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and lectures, and even
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showed that
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students
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academically failed because they have a job after their return from the
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.
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appears to be quite powerful. It is true that there are some positives to students
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. Despite
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, it seems that for many adolescent people, these pleasures are outweighed by issues which can cause stress and depression.
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, the problems of health, stress, and
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poverty
combine together to make education
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a challenging and potentially difficult time for many.
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way, but it appears to be the case very frequently.
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