The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018.

The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart details the average weekly spending for families in a given country in 1968 and 2018. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that
while
spending for
food
, fuel and power, clothing and footwear, and personal
goods
declined, the inverse was true for the remaining categories, with only household
goods
unchanged.
Although
spending on
food
was by far the most common in 1968, by 2018 leisure occupied most of the family budget, followed closely by housing. In 1968, families spent, on average 35% of their weekly income on
food
, significantly outstripping other budgetary concerns, each of which represented between 5% and 10%. Among these, fuel and power were the lowest at 6%. By 2018, spending patterns diverged more widely.
Food
represented a still significant 17% of the budget, trailing housing at 19% (a 9%
overall
rise) and leisure at 22% (a 13% increase). Transport
also
displayed a notable growth of 14%. Fuel and power, clothing and footwear, and personal
goods
fell to 4%, 5%, and 4%, respectively. Household
goods
were the only expense to remain fixed, at 7%.
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