In multi-cultural societies, people of different cultural backgrounds live and work together. Do you think the advantages of multi-cultural societies outweigh the disadvantages?
Individuals from different backgrounds coexist and work together in multinational communities.
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Culturally diverse communities are considered to be advantageous by offering rich cultural diversity. Multicultural societies provide opportunities for individuals to learn about and experience different cultures and traditions, and perspectives. If a person works in factories with a range of other nationalities, it is easier to examine international traditions, or even language since there is an interrelated environment.Linking Words
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fosters broadening horizons and being aware of unfamiliar beliefs.
Different cultural groups lead to cultural clashes and misunderstandings. Cultural differences caused by miscommunication of workers impact general relationships between nationalities. Linking Words
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, in South ,Kazakhstan Kazakhs and Uighurs had a huge conflict, which started from misunderstandings at the workplace and ended with the death of approximately 17 people. Linking Words
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, the majority of people have been arguing about discrimination against Uighurs for decades. Linking Words
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, it attracted a second drawback social segregation. Ethnic or cultural groups primarily interact with members of their own community.In some regions, there are separate areas divided into ethnic groups, where only representatives of the same nations are living. Linking Words
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can impede broader social cohesion and suppress the benefits of multiculturalism.
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, multicultural societies provide people with invaluable experience in learning foreign cultural details. Linking Words
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negative aspects,including a range of international conflicts and discrimination based on ,ethnicity mostly suppress a minority of advantages, By establishing single-national workplaces it is possible to build stronger and more harmonious communities.Linking Words
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