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The graph below shows the total amount of waste produced by cities and towns of six countries in 1980, 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the total amount of waste produced by cities and towns of six countries in 1980, 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table graph gives us information about the
million
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 tonnes of
waste
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 that have been produced in Japan, Korea, Ireland, Portugal,Poland and in the USA in the years 1980, 1990 and 2000
Overall
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, It can be noticed that the number of produced
waste
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 in the USA is respectively higher than in every country and its number has been increasing every decade. For more detailed information, Ireland is the second highest in
waste
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 produce' amount with 20
million
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tones
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 in 1980 that increased to 52million in 2000, after the USA which had 141
million
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tones
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 of
waste
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 in 1980 and 256 in 2000. Other countries that had an upward trend in the statistic of
waste
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 produced are Portugal from 2
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 tonnes to 5
million
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 and Japan from 0.6
million
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 to 3
million
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.
In contrast
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 to these, there is only Korea that had a downward trend in the
waste
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 amount that fell down
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 10
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tones
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tonnes
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 in one decade. Poland's produced
waste
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 total had fewer insignificant fluctuations,
although
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 remains relatively still around 10
million
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tones
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, waste, tones with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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