Successful sportsmen can earn a great deal more than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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day and age,

a great deal of

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successful

sportsmen

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outearn

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other

professions

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that are more important by a big margin. Some people

thinks

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that

sportsmen

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deserve the amount they earn

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others question

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amount paid to

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are

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more than a professional job. In

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discussion, we will talk about why some

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not have any objection towards the pay of a successful

athelete

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athlete

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some protest against the unfair pay to important

professions

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.

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of the essay will be my opinion regarding

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matter.

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, a successful

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sportsmen

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sportsman

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deserves to earn more than an important

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professions

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profession

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as they too tried their hardest in training and coping with stress. Many

athletes

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spend their younger days

to win

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winning

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games and

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fame to the country

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receiving backlash when they underperform which will cause them to fall into depression.

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, Lee a

world renowned

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professional badminton player was deemed the best in the world until he met his rival, Lin. Lee lost multiple times during the tournament and placed

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this

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causes his fans to spread hate speech about him which he

defnitely

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took a big hit during that time.

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, some protest against the fact that

athletes

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earn more than some other important profession because they weigh the value of what both parties provide to

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society.

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, people tend to talk about the unfairness in payment for important

profession

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professions

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.

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, a scientist who found a major breakthrough in technology earns twice lower

than

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athletes

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even though he helped humanity to take a big leap in new technologies. In conclusion,

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athletes

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is

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are

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able to earn more money compared to other key

professions

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with their fame, that does not stop a

profession

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professional

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to be richer than an athlete given that he

excel

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in starting a business or research facility.

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, I think that both parties deserve what they are paid for how much they have tried to mix their career into a business model.