Successful companies use advertisements to make more sales. What can make an advertisement effective? Do you think advertisements are a bad thing or a good thing for society?

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Advertising affects the way we perceive our life. The association with certain brands,

certain

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and certain

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accessories

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to the

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who we are and causes our acceptance or rejection. Large companies advertise to increase their sales of

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products (goods and services) to growing audiences around the

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. Advertising is a science. It considers the multiple factors that we count on to judge ourselves

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as successful

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. Does a Gucci bag give us added value? Does

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brand of cigarette project our success or does

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car pitch us into the right sphere and spectrum of life? Advertisers learn a lot from human nature and frailties to supply the right product for the customer.

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the leader seems to be the next leap forward in Advertising. Social Media Influencers highlight the way to new products. People gravitate towards social media influencers as they are portrayed as elite and successful. Making an informed choice is often sidelined by peer pressure. BLDC

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are the most recent thing in the market. They are supposed to be energy efficient, controlled with a remote controller and repel mosquitoes too. As a new introduction in the

market

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they command a premium price and my friend bought a few. Within a few weeks of operating the

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, the

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turned out big in promise but slow in delivering what was advertised. My friend

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returned the

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and settled for the regular

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with non-BLDC technology. We all want to be the first! I view advertising with the same suspicion I reserve for someone bragging. There is more aplomb than substance, there is more claim than truth. Advertising in the political

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is even more pitiable than

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commercial

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. Advertising, like religion, gives hope not certainty!

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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287 words

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Successful companies use advertisements to make more sales. What can make an advertisement effective? Do you think advertisements are a bad thing or a good thing for society?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that employee should be hire with interviews. Other says that other types of method are better. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throughout their courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this aﬀects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?