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Successful companies use advertisements to make more sales. What can make an advertisement effective? Do you think advertisements are a bad thing or a good thing for society?

#companies #advertisements #sales #advertisement #society
Advertising affects the way we perceive our life. The association with certain brands,
certain
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and certain
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 accessories
project
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projects
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 to the
world
 who we are and causes our acceptance or rejection. Large companies advertise to increase their sales of
such
 products (goods and services) to growing audiences around the
world
. Advertising is a science. It considers the multiple factors that we count on to judge ourselves
successful
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as successful
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. Does a Gucci bag give us added value? Does
this
 brand of cigarette project our success or does
this
 car pitch us into the right sphere and spectrum of life? Advertisers learn a lot from human nature and frailties to supply the right product for the customer.
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 the leader seems to be the next leap forward in Advertising. Social Media Influencers highlight the way to new products. People gravitate towards social media influencers as they are portrayed as elite and successful. Making an informed choice is often sidelined by peer pressure. BLDC
fans
 are the most recent thing in the market. They are supposed to be energy efficient, controlled with a remote controller and repel mosquitoes too. As a new introduction in the
market
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 they command a premium price and my friend bought a few. Within a few weeks of operating the
fans
, the
fans
 turned out big in promise but slow in delivering what was advertised. My friend
,
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 returned the
fans
 and settled for the regular
fans
 with non-BLDC technology. We all want to be the first! I view advertising with the same suspicion I reserve for someone bragging. There is more aplomb than substance, there is more claim than truth. Advertising in the political
world
 is even more pitiable than
the
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in the
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 commercial
world
. Advertising, like religion, gives hope not certainty!
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