Successful companies use advertisements to make more sales. What can make an advertisement effective? Do you think advertisements are a bad thing or a good thing for society?

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Advertising affects the way we perceive our life. The association with certain brands,

certain

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and certain

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accessories

project

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projects

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to the

world

who we are and causes our acceptance or rejection. Large companies advertise to increase their sales of

such

products (goods and services) to growing audiences around the

world

. Advertising is a science. It considers the multiple factors that we count on to judge ourselves

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as successful

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. Does a Gucci bag give us added value? Does

this

brand of cigarette project our success or does

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car pitch us into the right sphere and spectrum of life? Advertisers learn a lot from human nature and frailties to supply the right product for the customer.

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the leader seems to be the next leap forward in Advertising. Social Media Influencers highlight the way to new products. People gravitate towards social media influencers as they are portrayed as elite and successful. Making an informed choice is often sidelined by peer pressure. BLDC

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are the most recent thing in the market. They are supposed to be energy efficient, controlled with a remote controller and repel mosquitoes too. As a new introduction in the

market

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they command a premium price and my friend bought a few. Within a few weeks of operating the

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, the

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turned out big in promise but slow in delivering what was advertised. My friend

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apply

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returned the

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and settled for the regular

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with non-BLDC technology. We all want to be the first! I view advertising with the same suspicion I reserve for someone bragging. There is more aplomb than substance, there is more claim than truth. Advertising in the political

world

is even more pitiable than

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in the

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commercial

world

. Advertising, like religion, gives hope not certainty!

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Successful companies use advertisements to make more sales. What can make an advertisement effective? Do you think advertisements are a bad thing or a good thing for society?

Fully explain your ideas

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