The graph below shows the percentage of university students studying arts degrees over four different decades in three continents.

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The bar graph represents the information on the percentage of university students from three continents where being learned arts disciplines for about 30 years. Over the whole period, there are no changes between the indicators of the three continents, excepting the 1960s.

However

, every index has a fluctuating trend from the beginning of the period. In the 1960s,

Europe

was higher than America and Asia.

Europe

had the highest percentage in

this

decade.

In addition

, only Asia is going up and

in contrast

, America and

Europe

are going down. From the 1970s, America rose rapidly and took first place. The second place was given to

Europe

and the third place was for Asia. In conclusion, from the information from the

last

period, the percentage of art students in all continents is gradually the same.

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