Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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attention
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it
attention
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on the one hand, the popularity of advertising is so wispread
that consumers no longer pay much Correct your spelling
widespread
attention
for several reasons. first,
since
the people Correct word choice
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support
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who support
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view which
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believe
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believes
the
big amount of personally who has negative Correct article usage
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attitude
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attitudes
with
advertising Change preposition
toward
such
as the advertisement on the street or on the internet. this
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means
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habit that Correct your spelling
unconscious
skip
ads if they can do it. Change the verb form
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second,
a common belief of someone who advertising rarely impact
the truth about goods. Correct subject-verb agreement
impacts
as
a result many consumers do not believe what the advertisement says and just buy one good after considering Capitalize word
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successfully
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apply
the
advertising at convincing us to buy goods. Correct article usage
apply
repeatly
, the basic Correct your spelling
repeatedly
facror
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suppose whatever Change the capitalization
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for example
, some consumers can be persuaded after hearing an ad over and over again abour
a particular product. Correct your spelling
about
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Therefore
the
businesses contribute Correct article usage
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the
amount Correct article usage
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of
significant
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significance
on
advertising to raise Change preposition
to
aweareness
about their brand as much as.
in conclusion, with the convincing argument mentioned above the Correct your spelling
awareness
successfully
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successful
at
persuading of the advertising is over to no longer pay Change preposition
apply
attention
to it. by considering, all of pros
and cons of advertising recently.Correct article usage
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